Hungarianbeast on DeviantArthttps://www.deviantart.com/hungarianbeast/art/Denalien-Digitalized-181972969Hungarianbeast

Deviation Actions

Hungarianbeast's avatar

Denalien Digitalized

Published:
294 Views

Description

It's finished :)
1.day: i worked all day on this one, cuz' i finally found out how to use Photoshop, so yeah it's awesome.
I'm gonna make a BG and i'm gonna work on the rock also the shadowing too,but only after a good long sleep, so
Ya like it?Thanks! If you don't then go look at someone else's gallery, i'm just a beginner anyway...

2.day:I finished it. Ok i want comments and criticues to this one. I wanted to make a thunder too but it is still too hard for me.

I feel like something is wrong with this picture but i just can't see what..so i'll ask a few person i know to criticue my picture and tell me if he/she know how to fix it.

Before/original: [link]
Denalien the hungarianbeast (c) :iconhungarianbeast:
Image size
1208x1743px 482.53 KB
© 2010 - 2024 Hungarianbeast
Comments16
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
WendyAtticus's avatar
Righto!~ Here I go ^_^
I'd say first off, I love the anatomy and the pose. I think it looks very good and consistent. ^^ The rock looks very good too, I like the jagged lines 8D The shading also looks pretty good :3
Well, for things to improve my first thought is the lineart X3 It's pretty good and unbroken, but it's bumpy and doubled over in some spots. I'm not sure if the kind of blurry colouring is intentional or not :XD: I like it, but at the same time I think it should just completely fill inside the lines and not blur inward with the colour of the sky, although given the right sky effects, that could work out really nicely! :dance:
I find large amounts of fur increasingly difficult to shade XD If you're doing the shading with the brush or similar tool, try switching to a smaller size and making short lines coming up from the already shaded area. X3 After a few strokes it should look a bit more like fur.
:dance: I think overall it's an awesome pic~ And you're just overflowing with potential 8D Heck~ In a few weeks of playing with Photoshop, you'll have it all figured out ;P